Issue 4 > rough version upload

[John Kirkham]

Here's the rough version of issue 4. Let me know if there are any errors/mistakes

Check the end of the thread for the latest version

[Dave Thomson]

Doh! Just missed this one. I thought I had sent my submission in time but I sent it to the wrong email address.

Still, this is an excellent issue with some excellent art on display!

[John Kirkham]

If I've got some free time on Friday I'll add your stuff, Dave. It means redoing all the numbers on the contents page...

Actually I've just found another contents page on page 82, how the f**k did that happen. Oh well, there's the first mistake. Looks like I've got to redo the contents page anyway!

[Dave Thomson]

Thanks John!

I'll send my submission to the correct address immediately!

[Adam Grose]

page two -
'each year they producing' - should this be 'each year they produce?'
'lising of some of' - should be 'listing some of '
You've doubled the contents page - the other one is among Tony's section
SMALL PRESS DIRECTORY
The Dragonfly is on hold for the moment... Chapter One still available online though.

Covers for The Prison and Flood in the SP directory I will email to you

[Malcolm Kirk]

You've spelt Paul Harrison-Davies' name wrong on the contents page.

[John Kirkham]

arrr, the contents page, it be cursed

[dave hailwood]

I'll download the issue in my lunchbreak at work tomorrow and have a nosey.

Looks like Adam and Malcolm and co have done a fine proof reading job so far.

If there's any spelling mistakes anyone notices in the Accent UK features sections, let me know by thursday so I can get ammendments sent to John by Friday.

Cheers for all your hard work, John!

[John Kirkham]

Right, here's ROUGH VERSION 02

Got up early to fix things. So all cock-ups emended plus now contains added 'Dave Thomson'

Also now added the hi-res Adam covers to the Smallpress Directory. So everything should be fixed.

[Adam Grose]

so far I've only seen this... Will have a better scan tonight. An excellent issue and well packed to the brim ;)

page two smallpress directory

Listng - mis-spelling (listing)

[dave hailwood]

Okay, just had a thorough look through the issue, and haven't noticed any more errors other than the ones that Adam mentioned.

Damn fine issue, great design from John Kirkham, and some of the best work I've seen from many of the contributors. Also nice to see a few new faces in there. I'm looking forward to giving it a more thorough read tonight, as the Time Bomb comic early work looks very intriguing.

I'll give a more thorough review of things when I ge tthe chance (probably in a couple of weeks, unless the opportunity presents itself tomorrow).

John, don't forget to give John Freeman the go ahead to mention the issue on down the tubes when it's finalised.

Bloody nice job, folks!

[John Kirkham]

This thread is now closed.

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