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[John Kirkham]

If you'd like to receive some feedback on your artwork post it in this section

Please start a separate thread for each piece of artwork.

[ERIKA]

i've found the forum...isn't it!?

[ERIKA]

here is an exercise about glasses...and the character himself.

[dave hailwood]

I meant to comment on this page ages ago but never quite got round to it.

Great range of facial expressions on your characters, Erika. Good postures too. The face in the bottom left corner looked slightly off; I think it's something to do with the chin/lips but couldn't quite work it out.

Other than that, really good pencil sketches. I look forward to seeing you translate that talent into some strip pages. Keep up the good work.

[ERIKA]

thank you Dave!!
i'm really glad you like it, and you are correct i still have to work a lot on proportions...
i've noticed that every scriptwriter says "panel by panel work..."!!
i will try and then post it here
thank you again
erika

[David Gallagher]

hey john,

hope you don't mind, i'm looking to get some feedback for my characters. critism welcome.

these are my first completed attempts on Manga studio. what do you think?

[David Gallagher]